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Took me so long to write this one... my only excuse is that there was really A LOT going on in my life in the last two months, and while I find it quite easy to make pictures, lately, I find it extremely hard to write.
This chapter has not been beta'ed yet. I was just too impatient to wait XD

Bioware owns all, except for Danielle Johannsen (my OC) and the plot of this silly story.

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:iconmegi97kitty:
I need moooore :D I am addicted to this... Please give me more :D
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*Sorceress-Nadira Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww, I will! I need to write it down and I will XD
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:iconmegi97kitty:
I hope you will, because it is amazing :D Perfect in every detail.
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*Sorceress-Nadira Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:blush: Thank You so much! It means a lot to me!
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:iconmegi97kitty:
I just stated a well-known fact :D
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*Sorceress-Nadira Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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*Squishie-chan Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Uguuuu, I can't wait to read more of this!! :la:
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*Sorceress-Nadira Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
There will be more! Please be patient :D
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:iconbig-wired:
Another fantastic chapter.

It does say something that Shepard wants what is best for his crew, and here he's essentially asking her if she is comfortable living with what her heart tells her as opposed to some cold, hard truths. It's not a deception, not by any length, since they all know, thanks to Jack, but a choice.

And yay, Kasumi! More of her and Danielle acting like sisters, please?
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*Sorceress-Nadira Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank You :) I'm so happy to hear You liked it!

When that part of the chapter somehow "wrote itself" I realised that what I wanted to show is: what We think is good for others is not always what is ACTUALLY good for them. Which is why Jake went to great lengths to make sure, as You said, if Danielle is going to be okay with the situation as it is :)

Not sure when Kasumi is going to make her next appearance, but be sure there'll be some "sisterhood" between them soon ;) (Jack first, though!)
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